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NR601 WK1 Assignment -Pulmonary Function Test Interpretation
NR601 WK1 Assignment -Pulmonary Function Test Interpretation
Introduction
COPD has two long-term lung diseases emphysema and chronic bronchitis emphysema they occur together. Any patient suffering from it has difficulty in breathing. According to the researchers, there is no cure for COPD, though steps are there manage the disease. The following is a case study of a patient suffering from COPD, diagnosis, management, and prevention strategies suggested in the COPD guidelines and explanation of implementing these strategies in a clinical setting.
- Case Study
- Treatment
- COPD Prevention Strategies
- References
Understanding Pulmonary Function Test
Criteria Actual/Possible points
Organization:
Introduction (2.5 points each): 5 /5
__x Cited Attention Getter __ Not cited Attention Getter
_x_ Clear Thesis statement __ No or Unclear thesis statement
Body(5 points each): 6 /10
__x Clear topic sentence __ Unclear topic sentences
__ Effective transitions x__ No transitions
Conclusion (2.5 points each): 5 /5
x__ Paraphrases Central Idea __ Exact C.I. restatement or nothing
x__ Explicitly ties back to A.G. __ no tie back
Analysis (10 points each): 20 /40
__x ‘ism’ thoroughly described __ unclear/ perfunctory description
_ Rhetorical appeals Analyzed x_ unclear analysis
__ Target Audience analyzed x__ No/inaccurate audience analysis
_x_ Critical cultural elements __ No analysis of critical cultural elements
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Writing: 10 /10
_x_ Grammar/ spelling Correct __ Grammatical/ spelling errors
Within constraints:
1,000-1,500 words/ word count included after the works cited/references 15 /15
Cites following APA (references) or MLA (works cited) 15 /15
***PAPERS UNDER 1000 WORDS WILL NOT BE ACCEPTED
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